Here's my rewrite of my WIP excerpt, originally posted on Roni's Beta Club . Let me explain that there is a prologue which details the events of May 2005. The "present action" in chapter one takes place in February 2005. Have a gander. Let me know if you think I'm on the right track for infusing flashblack. Chapter 1 One might assume that if Laurel was going to have a near-mental-breakdown that it would have happened after David's death, after his vague and -- what could only be alledged -- suicide a la slap-in-the-face. No. Instead, it was three months prior (eerily, almost three months to the day) when Laurel nearly went bat-shit crazy. __ "Tell me about your childhood, Laurel," said Dr. Mian as he settled into an oversized chair. He turned to face her. She thought he had kind eyes. "Ah, yes. Childhood trauma. Don't all our stories reall...
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